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My Birthday - Page One by Jinx-2 My Birthday - Page One by Jinx-2
Well... this is the first page...
Its from a roleplay me and :iconbreezecodi: did... nothing too big, but I put a lot of work into it! :3

I do not own the charactors, (c)Masashi Kishimoto, but I do own the drawing and the art.
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breezecodi Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Student General Artist
Love it, brat. Fix up my name in the description though <333

As I said last night, Pam and I were beyond words when it came to this~
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Jinx-2 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
tchhhhh I hate you guys :I
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breezecodi Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Student General Artist
You love us like we love you~
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Jinx-2 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
XDDD
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EmotionalRockfish Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Student General Artist
I'm thinking about working on a comic myself, once I get used to my tablet, of course. The first two panels are nice, but the explosion is rough and you should clean that up a bit. That's something I haven't got the hang of either, since I've been redrawing the same picture over and over again for the last two days trying to make it look better. It's bloody frustrating. Perhaps for the writing you could insert text. I'm fairly sure most applications have an option, if not you could just open MS paint and add it. I'm only saying that because you want your words to be neat and straight and consistent, unless you are looking for an effect that involves these things.

Still good though.
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Jinx-2 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha thanks xD And yeah I gave up on the explosion cause I was tired and I had to go to bed.
My favorite is the first two panels <3

And I was looking for effect with the writing but in later ones I'm thinking of using text!
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EmotionalRockfish Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Student General Artist
You should edit it, it would make it look alot better.

Also, use text for the speech bubbles. Not so much the last panel, I like that.
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Jinx-2 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, thats what I was thinking. But again I was in a rush, and now I'm just too lazy to get up and do anything.
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EmotionalRockfish Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Student General Artist
Same...
I have work to do and I can't be stuffed to touch it, I just want to write fanfiction and draw, is that too much to ask?
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Jinx-2 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Hahah, it's fair.
I know how you feel.
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